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People read information and news from social media these days. Is it a positive or negative development?

People read information and news from social media these days. Is it a positive or negative development? o8omK
News and information are read by people from different sources of the internet in our daily life. In my opinion, this tendency should be considered as beneficial, since a wide range of information can be obtained through the Internet, the accessibility of report and data on websites play a crucial role, as well. Firstly, modern individuals are able to get a variety of useful and interesting information. In particular, many people are interested in narrow-specialized information. To take one example, middle-aged people not only in Azerbaijan, but also worldwide are mostly engaged in news related to sports, due to this issue they search for attractive sports’ pages through various social platforms, obtain concrete results and make the conclusions. Therefore, social media is necessary in order to get the required knowledge about the different fields. On the other hand, the accessibility and the easy usage of social media create additional advantages. Mankind always was interested in obtaining available sources of information. In our daily life there is a great opportunity to easily register on various Internet websites, thereby obtaining some interesting news. For instance, compared with broadcast shown on TV, attainability to platforms such as Facebook, Twitter and LinkedIn create additional extra benefits. Thus, not hard control and achievability should be taken into account, nowadays. In conclusion, the current person is lucky to read a piece of information and news from applications for obtaining a huge amount of knowledge. Moreover, to find information easily and its openness give the personality some opportunities.
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are read
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sources of the internet in our daily life. In my opinion, this tendency should
be considered
as beneficial, since a wide range of
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information
can
be obtained
through the Internet, the accessibility of report and data on websites play a crucial role,
as well
.

Firstly
, modern individuals are able to
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get
a variety of useful and interesting
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information
.
In particular
,
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many
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people
are interested
in narrow-specialized
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information
. To take one example, middle-aged
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people
not
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only
in Azerbaijan,
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but
also
worldwide are
mostly
engaged in
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news
related to sports, due to this issue they search for attractive sports’ pages through various social platforms, obtain concrete results and
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make
the conclusions.
Therefore
, social media is necessary in order to
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get
the required knowledge about the
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different
fields.

On the other hand
, the accessibility and the easy usage of social media create additional advantages. Mankind always
was interested
in obtaining available sources of
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information
. In our daily life there is a great opportunity to
easily
register on various Internet websites, thereby obtaining
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some
interesting
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news
.
For instance
, compared with broadcast shown on TV, attainability to platforms such as Facebook, Twitter and LinkedIn create additional extra benefits.
Thus
, not
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hard
control and
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achievability
should
be taken
into account, nowadays.

In conclusion
, the
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current
person is lucky to read a piece of
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information
and
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news
from applications for obtaining a huge amount of knowledge.
Moreover
, to find
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information
easily
and its openness give the personality
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
opportunities.

IELTS essay People read information and news from social media these days. Is it a positive or negative development?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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