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it is generally agreed that the amount of rubbish created by humans today is a worldwide problem

it is generally agreed that the amount of rubbish created by humans today is a worldwide problem OlpDy
Our living surroundings depend significantly on the activities that humans do every day; yet the things humans produce are not totally benefit to the Mother Earth. It is true that people are producing more and more trash. There are several causes of why they are unaware of how to protect the environment and solutions to reduce the load of pollution we create. Firstly, in recent decades, the world is witnessing the baby booming in almost all major cities, which total up to more than seven billion citizens. More people being born is equivalent to more resources consumed, including the consumption of transport, water and food. All of these products manufacturing and consumption process would give out a huge extent of rubbish which grows with more or less the same ratio with the growth of population. Secondly, industrialization revolution brings consequences of environment concerns. More factories opened equals more unhealthy airs being emitted to the atmosphere and more waste being dumped after the production line. For example, plastics that are disposed of improperly or sent to landfills do not break down and can pollute the climate and pose a hazard to animals. Turning to various solutions to improve the surroundings, Governments should take more pro-active role in managing the supply of debris produced by regulations and education. Firstly, to reduce the effect of overproduction on environment, Governments can consider giving factories a standard upper limit on extent of waste produced per production line. Moreover, Governments should provide sufficient rubbish bins and punish people who throw away rubble in area such as parks, streets and rivers with fines. By way of conclusion, overpopulation and industrialization are the main causes of more lumber being produced. With support from regulators and proper education, citizens should be more aware to recycle the products and save more. Much can be done in the near future to not merely reduce the waste on the contrary also convert them into sustainable sources of energy, which in turn make the climate better for everyone.
Our living surroundings depend
significantly
on the activities that humans do every day;
yet
the things humans produce are not
totally
benefit to the Mother Earth. It is true that
people
are producing more and more trash. There are several causes of why they are unaware of how to protect the environment and solutions to
reduce
the load of pollution we create.

Firstly
, in recent decades, the world is witnessing the baby booming in almost all major cities, which total up to more than seven billion citizens. More
people
being born
is equivalent to more resources consumed, including the consumption of transport, water and food. All of these products manufacturing and consumption process would give out a huge extent of rubbish which grows with more or less the same ratio with the growth of population.

Secondly
, industrialization revolution brings consequences of environment concerns. More factories opened equals more unhealthy airs
being emitted


to the atmosphere and more waste
being dumped
after the production line.
For example
, plastics that
are disposed
of
improperly
or
sent
to landfills do not break down and can pollute the climate and pose a hazard to animals.

Turning to various solutions to
improve
the surroundings,
Governments
should take more pro-active role in managing the supply of debris produced by regulations and education.
Firstly
, to
reduce
the effect of overproduction on environment,
Governments
can consider giving factories a standard upper limit on extent of waste produced per production line.
Moreover
,
Governments
should provide sufficient rubbish bins and punish
people
who throw away rubble in area such as parks, streets and rivers with fines.

By way of conclusion, overpopulation and industrialization are the main causes of more lumber
being produced
. With support from regulators and proper education, citizens should be more aware to recycle the products and save more. Much can
be done
in the near future to not
merely
reduce
the waste
on the contrary
also
convert them into sustainable sources of energy, which in turn
make
the climate better for everyone.
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IELTS essay it is generally agreed that the amount of rubbish created by humans today is a worldwide problem

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