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People often think about creating an ideal society but most of times fail in making this happen.

People often think about creating an ideal society but most of times fail in making this happen. nNAQR
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my
point of view
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has to
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establich
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is a place where
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get
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in an ideal
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every one
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relationship among their friends relatives and
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will be compassionate then
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IELTS essay People often think about creating an ideal society but most of times fail in making this happen.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
139 words
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