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People nowadays sleep less then they used to be in the past what do you think reason behind this effect on individuals and people around them

People nowadays sleep less then they used to be in the past what do you think reason behind this effect on individuals and people around them 0BleQ
Taking a good slip of Limited hours are beneficial for refreshing individuals mood and also useful for their health. therefore, it is believed that in the present scenario sleep less than that they used to in the previous time. in the subsequent paragraphs l will shed light on both the associated with the above proposition and arrive at a logical conclusion. To embarked on the gargantuan and predominated reason is that masses are surrounded with sophisticated tools, they live in a modernised word in 21st century. at present People Are indulge in more activities and works, they have hectic schedule. to elaborate, students Have burden of this study on their shoulders and instead of that other individuals have pressure of their work or job due to which they cannot take sleep of proper hours. for example getting good score in field of study students wake up at night till long hours. another ganttic thing is that the masses have to confront the problem of anxiety stress and burden. It can affect the mental and Physical health of a person it can also holds the Holistic development. and other colossal thing is that there are too much into Technology that's why they have less time to spend with other people. they do not want to interact with each other. as a result they become less interactive with society it also comes the communal harmony. for example a survey was conducted in 2015 the researchers found that in habitant takes less sleep and they are suffering from problem of stress. to recapitulate, in my perspective, although there are unlimited factors of taking less sleep these days such as hecticschedule, the effect of less sleeping on people likewise stress or burden cannot be neglected.
Taking a
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slip of Limited hours are beneficial for refreshing individuals mood and
also
useful for their health.
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therefore
, it
is believed
that in the present scenario
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sleep
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less
than that they
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used
to in the previous time.
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in
the subsequent paragraphs l will shed light on both the associated with the above proposition and arrive at a logical conclusion. To embarked on the gargantuan and predominated reason is that masses
are surrounded
with sophisticated tools, they
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live
in a
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modernised
word in 21st century.
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at
present
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People
Are indulge in more activities and works, they have hectic schedule.
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to
elaborate, students Have burden of this study on their shoulders and
instead
of that
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other
individuals have pressure of their work or job due to which they cannot take
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sleep
of proper hours.
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for
example getting
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good
score in field of study students wake up at night till long hours.
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another
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ganttic
thing is that the masses
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have to
confront the problem of anxiety
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stress
and burden. It can affect the mental and Physical health of a person it can
also
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holds
the Holistic development.
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and
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other
colossal thing is that there are too much into Technology that's why they have
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less
time to spend with
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other
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people
.
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they
do not want to interact with each
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other
.
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as
a result they become
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less
interactive with society it
also
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comes
the communal harmony.
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for
example a survey
was conducted
in 2015 the researchers found that in habitant takes
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less
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sleep and
they are suffering from problem of
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stress
.
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to
recapitulate, in my perspective, although there
are unlimited
factors of taking
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less
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sleep
these days such as
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hecticschedule
, the effect of
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less
sleeping on
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people
likewise
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stress
or burden cannot
be neglected
.
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IELTS essay People nowadays sleep less then they used to be in the past what do you think reason behind this effect on individuals and people around them

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  American English
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291 words
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