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People nowadays are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken for this?

People nowadays are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken for this? r86V2
In recent times due to everyday's hassel and bussel and because of tight schedule and sedentry life style has caused degradation of health. Living healthy life is significant. There are many reasons in world that lessen the healthy lifestyle. I further discuss causes for this and solution with appropriate examples. The main reason for unhealthy lifestyle is the food habits. In past time, the food was healthy and hygienic compare to today. children and adults tend to eat outside and fast food more frequently in modern times. Moreover the fast food contains less nutrition and more fats in diatery value. Thus, over consumption of this type of food cause additional calorie consumption then the required consumption and as a result people gain weight and become fattier. Second reason is differentiate meal timings. in past the whole family used to do breakfast, supper and dinner altogether and at decided time regularly. but in recent time due to work like people tend to skip breakfast and sometimes take dinner in late night. Because of this natural metabolisum get disturb and due to that people feel inactive and tired. However, if people change their lifestyle and try to stay active with work and life balance de can live active life. In augments people can choose healthy diet for fast food and outside food people can play any kind of spot everyday or they can do any kind of physical activity that has them to stay fit for longer time in life. For illustration, in recent survey by Indian medical association children who plays everyday about one hour or more tend to be more fit and motivated than those who don't. To conclude, physical activity better lifestyle and food habits helps in live life better and keep people healthy.
In recent
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style has caused degradation of health. Living
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healthy
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life
is significant. There are
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many
reasons in world that lessen the
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healthy
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lifestyle
. I
further
discuss causes for this and solution with appropriate examples.

The main reason for unhealthy
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lifestyle
is the
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food
habits. In past
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time
, the
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food
was
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healthy
and hygienic compare to
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today
.
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children
and adults tend to eat outside and
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fast
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food
more
frequently
in modern
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times
.
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the
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fast
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food
contains less nutrition and more fats in
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diatery
value.
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, over consumption of this type of
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food
cause additional calorie consumption then the required consumption and
as a result
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people
gain weight and become fattier. Second reason is
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differentiate
meal timings.
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in
past the whole family
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used
to do breakfast, supper and dinner altogether and at decided
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time
regularly
.
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but
in recent
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time
due to work like
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people
tend to skip breakfast and
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sometimes
take dinner in late night.
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natural
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metabolisum
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disturb and due to that
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people
feel inactive and tired.

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, if
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people
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change
their
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lifestyle
and try to stay active with work and
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life
balance
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can
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live
active
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. In augments
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people
can choose
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healthy
diet for
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and outside
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people
can play any kind of spot
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they can do any kind of physical activity that has them to stay fit for longer
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in
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. For illustration, in recent survey by Indian medical association children who
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plays
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about one hour or more tend to be more fit and motivated than those who don't.

To conclude
, physical activity better
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lifestyle
and
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food
habits
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helps
in
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live
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life
better and
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keep
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people
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healthy
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IELTS essay People nowadays are not as fit and active as they were in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken for this?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
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