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Some people feel that with the help of technology, there is little difficulty in solving complex mathematical problems. Therefore mathematics is no longer a mandatory subject at schools and colleges. To what extent do u agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience or knowledge.

Some people feel that with the help of technology, there is little difficulty in solving complex mathematical problems. Therefore mathematics is no longer a mandatory subject at schools and colleges. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience or knowledge. MMyJ6
There is no doubt that technology can solve any problem in a short duration of time. Over the past few decades, technical advancements have also impacted the way traditional subjects should be taught in academic institutions. While some people argue that mathematical knowledge is no more required as difficult problems can be solved with technology usage, but, to a great extent I disagree with this statement. This essay will elaborate views in support of my argument. Those who believe that automation is the replacement of mathematics argue that it can solve many challenging tasks with little efforts. This is because one can complete multiple assignments simultaneously often without any errors. For example, a simple algorithm can be used to program computer software to process huge data hassle-free. In contrast, if there was no technical assistance, it would take a lot of time to solve even simple problems. However, I would argue that mathematics has a wider contribution than just solving difficult mathematical equations. The reason for this is it helps students in developing analytical mind, enhancing problem-solving skills and aptitude which can be used in other fields of study. For instance, knowledge of mathematics can be beneficial in other subjects like Physics, Chemistry, geography, accounting etc. If mathematics subject is discontinued, then this will impact the overall academic development of students in multiple ways. In conclusion, although the usage of machinery in solving problems is tempting as it is accurate and fast, I believe there is no alternative to mathematics because it imparts many skills. It is predicted that in future, academic institutions will continue to teach mathematics as compulsory subject.
There is no doubt that technology can solve any problem in a short duration of time. Over the past few decades, technical advancements have
also
impacted the way traditional
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subjects
should
be taught
in academic institutions. While
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some
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people
argue that mathematical knowledge is no more required as difficult problems can
be solved
with technology usage,
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but
, to a great extent I disagree with this statement. This essay will elaborate views in support of my argument.

Those who believe that automation is the replacement of
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mathematics
argue that it can solve
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many
challenging tasks with
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little
efforts. This is
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because
one can complete multiple assignments
simultaneously
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often
without any errors.
For example
, a simple algorithm can be
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used
to program computer software to process huge data hassle-free.
In contrast
, if there was no technical assistance, it would take
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a lot of
time to solve even simple problems.

However
, I would argue that
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mathematics
has a wider contribution than
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just
solving difficult mathematical equations.
The reason for this is
it
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helps
students in developing analytical mind, enhancing problem-solving
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skills
and aptitude which can be
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used
in other fields of study.
For instance
, knowledge of
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mathematics
can be beneficial in other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subjects
like Physics, Chemistry, geography, accounting etc. If
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mathematics
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
subject
is discontinued
, then this will impact the
overall
academic development of students in multiple ways.

In conclusion
, although the usage of machinery in solving problems is tempting as it is accurate and
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fast
, I believe there is no alternative to
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mathematics
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because
it imparts
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many
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skills
. It
is predicted
that
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in future
, academic institutions will continue to teach
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mathematics
as compulsory
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subject
.
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IELTS essay Some people feel that with the help of technology, there is little difficulty in solving complex mathematical problems. Therefore mathematics is no longer a mandatory subject at schools and colleges. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience or knowledge.

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