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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your opinion 15oBn

Arts reflect culture and heritage of a nation. A segment of society believes that arts should be included as mandatory subject for children in school curriculum while other opine that it is waste of time. In this essay, I will elaborate both the views and frame opinion at end. To begin with, some people think that there are other salient subjects which holds more value than art such as Mathematics, Science and Computers. Children should be taught such subjects which will help them in securing their future by earning good jobs. In addition to this, it is also believed that making art as mandatory subject will surge up the burden on students.

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