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people lived a better life a hundred years ago. argue for or against the statement giving reasons and examples

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Changes are inevitable; however, it could be positive or negative, one such discussion is much needed to go against the motion that states, human life was better 100 years ago. I strongly disagree with this with reasons that will be elaborated briefly in the following essay. Though, a few might say that people lived in harmony with nature a century ago, it was also noticed that they suffered with many diseases and were stuck with famines in research. For instance, my grandfather is in his early 100s and he says that he had witnessed the end of the previous century which wasn’t a joyful era. He has also stated his parents’ experience who underwent a plethora of devastating illnesses and have lost many family members due to frequent epidemics and endemics. In recent times, you are so advanced in technology and science that deaths have been brought down to a greater extent and life is fast and smooth. For example, in the UAE, they are so advanced that they create artificial rains that make their soil fertile and help in cultivation. Whereas, 100 years ago, farmers mostly depended on rain to grow crops. No rains, no harvest; thus, lives were lost from hunger and thirst. In conclusion, I would like to emphasize that numerous fields have seen tremendous growth, that in turn improved the standard of living of the present day homo-sapiens. Therefore, these are far more beneficial, and these facilities have brought positive and improved changes to our lives, than it was a hundred years ago.
Changes
are inevitable;
however
, it could be
positive
or
negative
, one such discussion is
much needed
to go against the motion that states, human life was better 100 years ago. I
strongly
disagree with this with reasons that will
be elaborated
briefly
in the following essay.

Though, a
few might
say that
people
lived
in harmony with nature a century ago, it was
also
noticed that they suffered with
many
diseases and
were stuck
with famines in research.
For instance
, my grandfather is in his early
100s and
he says that he had witnessed the
end
of the previous century which wasn’t a joyful era. He has
also
stated his parents’ experience who underwent a plethora of devastating illnesses and have lost
many
family members due to frequent epidemics and endemics.

In recent times, you are
so
advanced in technology and science that deaths have
been brought
down to a greater extent and life is
fast
and smooth.
For example
, in the UAE, they are
so
advanced that they create artificial rains that
make
their soil fertile and
help
in cultivation. Whereas, 100 years ago, farmers
mostly
depended on rain to grow crops. No rains, no harvest;
thus
,
lives
were lost
from hunger and thirst.

In conclusion
, I would like to emphasize that numerous fields have
seen
tremendous growth, that in turn
improved
the standard of living of the present day homo-sapiens.
Therefore
, these are far more beneficial, and these facilities have brought
positive
and
improved
changes
to our
lives
, than it was a hundred years ago.
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IELTS essay people lived a better life a hundred years ago. argue for or against the statement giving reasons and examples

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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