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People in the limelight should be responsible to set a good example for others by their good behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

People in the limelight should be responsible to set a good example for others by their good behavior. pR9eL
Behaviour is a vital aspect of any individual. It is argued that celebrities or famous individuals are responsible for setting a good example for others by behaving in a good manner. I agree because their presentation at national and international levels shows the nations behaviour and attitude towards any act or thing. Famous people should be responsible for any activity they do because individuals follow them and their activities to learn things from them, therefore the popular individuals should take care while representing anything to the public. Fan following of a sports star or film star is very common in India, especially youngsters try to mimic them to learn their talent and skills. For instance, famous cricketer Virat Kohli is quite popular around the world and millions of people follow him to learn boating skills and many more activities he does. In addition to that, good behaviour by famous people shows the manners and etiquette of them while representing. Often diplomatic people visit to any other country in professional or traditional dress code while representing their nation. In other words, government officials are strictly guided to wear dress code for any professional meeting inside or outside the nation. For instance, in each nation, ministerial level of professionals has their own dress code according to the country's tradition. Such as, America have coat-pent and India have Achkan and pajama. In conclusion, famous people should take responsibility of their action and represent in a good behaviour, because their presentation is followed by many individuals around the world and in some occasion they are representing the nation.
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individual
. It
is argued
that celebrities or
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famous
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individuals
are responsible for setting a
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good
example for others by behaving in a
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good
manner. I
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agree
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because
their presentation at national and international levels
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shows
the
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nations
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behaviour
and attitude towards any act or thing.

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Famous
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people
should be responsible for any activity they do
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because
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individuals
follow them and their activities to learn things from them,
therefore
the popular
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individuals
should take care while representing anything to the public. Fan following of a sports star or film star is
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very
common in India,
especially
youngsters try to mimic them to learn their talent and
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skills
.
For instance
,
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famous
cricketer
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Virat
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Kohli
is quite popular around the world and millions of
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people
follow him to learn boating
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skills
and
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many
more activities he does.

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to that,
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good
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behaviour
by
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famous
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people
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shows
the manners and etiquette of them while representing.
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diplomatic
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people
visit to any other country in professional or traditional dress code while representing their
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nation
.
In other words
,
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government
officials are
strictly
guided to wear dress code for any professional meeting inside or outside the
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nation
.
For instance
, in each
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nation
, ministerial level of professionals has their
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own
dress code according to the country's tradition. Such as, America have coat-pent and India have
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Achkan
and pajama.

In conclusion
,
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famous
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people
should take responsibility of their action and represent in a
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good
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behaviour
,
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because
their presentation
is followed
by
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many
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individuals
around the world and in
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some
occasion they are representing the
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nation
.
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IELTS essay People in the limelight should be responsible to set a good example for others by their good behavior.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
264 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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Lexical Resource: 7.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
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Task Achievement: 7.5
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