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people in the lime light have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behaviour

People in the limelight have always played a big role in our public. The young generation will learn based on their actions in front of others. I totally agree with this statement because well-known people have an enormous impact on teenagers' behavior. Numerous people follow their example. First of all, Famous people should know their responsibility in public and influence in government. They can do a negative impact everywhere by accident. They are in the public eye and their actions even small mistakes can cause big problems.
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IELTS essay people in the lime light have a responsibility to set an example for others by their good behaviour

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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