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People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint. v.5

People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint. v. 5
Over the last few decades our lifestyle has dramatically changed; these changes have also altered the way people used to work. The new term, job-hopping, appeared in labor markets, which describes a person who works briefly in one position after another rather than staying at a job for a long time. Some experts favor job hopping over lingering in a position for a long time since it is, according to experts, more beneficial, is it so? Conducting the same job for the same company can be beneficial in terms of stability and friends. Most employees prefer a steady job, though with relatively low salary, to looking for a better one with higher income, especially in times of “ups and downs” in economies of the world. It can be hard to make friends who would back up in emergency situations at workplace. My uncle, for instance, could not have delivered a presentation for his new project to the CEO of the company, had not he borrowed a shirt of his work friend when he had spilled coffee on his own one. Nevertheless, individuals who are in the same position for 10-20 years have a risk to miss opportunities for better appointments in other companies; therefore, they also miss having a higher salary. There is Steve Jobs’s famous citation: “Do what you love, love what you do”. It seems in order to ascertain one’s passion, one has to try several jobs until he finds it. My personal experience can be a good example. I love managing finance, so luckily I work as a financial manager for Apple company; however, I hopped several jobs working as an accountant assistant, as my major is accountant, in several companies after graduation. On the other hand, employers are reluctant to hire job hoppers due to less credibility. Market economy prevails in most countries as a result companies have own commercial secrets. Therefore, entities favor employees who tend to work for long-term over job hoppers. Labor markets have changed resulting in two common types of employees: job hoppers and ones who prefer working for a long time. It appears both types have advantages and drawbacks, thus, it is up to companies and employees to opt which type they want.
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dramatically
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changed
; these
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changes
have
also
altered the way
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people
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used
to
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work
. The new term, job-hopping, appeared in labor markets, which
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describes
a person
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who
works
briefly
in one position after another
rather
than staying at a
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job
for a long
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time
.
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Some
experts favor
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job
hopping over lingering in a position for a long
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time
since it is, according to experts, more beneficial, is it
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so
?

Conducting the same
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job
for the same
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company
can be beneficial in terms of stability and friends. Most
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employees
prefer a steady
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job
, though with
relatively
low salary, to looking for a better one with higher income,
especially
in
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times
of “ups and downs” in economies of the world. It can be
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hard
to
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make
friends
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who
would back up in emergency situations at workplace. My uncle,
for instance
, could not have delivered a presentation for his new project to the CEO of the
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company
, had not he borrowed a shirt of his
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work
friend when he had spilled coffee on his
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own
one.
Nevertheless
, individuals
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who
are in the same position for 10-20 years have a
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risk
to miss opportunities for better appointments in other
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companies
;
therefore
, they
also
miss having a higher salary.

There is Steve Jobs’s
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famous
citation: “Do what you
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love
,
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love
what you do”. It seems in order to ascertain one’s passion, one
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has to
try several
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jobs
until he finds it. My personal experience can be a
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good
example. I
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love
managing finance,
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so
luckily I
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work
as a financial manager for Apple
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company
;
however
, I hopped several
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jobs
working as an accountant assistant, as my major is accountant, in several
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companies
after graduation.
On the other hand
, employers are reluctant to hire
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job
hoppers due to less credibility. Market economy prevails in most countries
as a result
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companies
have
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own
commercial secrets.
Therefore
, entities favor
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employees
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who
tend to
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work
for long-term over
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job
hoppers.

Labor markets have
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changed
resulting in two common types of
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employees
:
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job
hoppers and
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ones
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who
prefer working for a long
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time
. It appears both types have advantages and drawbacks,
thus
, it is up to
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companies
and
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employees
to opt which type they want.
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34Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
372 words
6.0
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