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people do not recycle waste materials

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Waste management and recycling is a huge problem around the world which led to a disasteres effect on the environment. this essay will discuss the factors cintributed to this issue and propose potential solution to resolve ar at least alleviate the situation. In my opinion, the most important reason for people not managing their waste is the ignorance of the huge harm they are causing the environment. beyond that, the infrastructure do not support recycling. in other words, even if someone wants to recycle their waste, they not able to because of the lack of recycling cans and te place where you can put your waste for recycling is very far from the city. by that said it is costly and un efficient for people to recycle their waste.
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management and
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recycling
is a huge problem around the world which led to a
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disasteres
effect on the environment.
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cintributed
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ar
at least alleviate the situation.

In my opinion, the most
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reason for
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people
not managing their
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waste
is the ignorance of the huge harm they are causing the environment.
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beyond
that, the infrastructure do not support
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recycling
.
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in
other words, even if someone wants to recycle their
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waste
,
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they
not able to
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because
of the lack of
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recycling
cans and
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te
place where you can put your
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waste
for
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recycling
is
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very
far from the city.
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by
that said it is costly and
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efficient for
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IELTS essay people do not recycle waste materials

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
129 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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