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People differ in their tendencies to work alone or in a team. Discuss both and state your choice?

People differ in their tendencies to work alone or in a team. 836x
Work is bread and butter in today’s life. It is difficult to survive for one without work. Some people to prefer working in team while others prefer to work individual. This essay will shed light on advantages of working in team or individually. Working in a team has many advantages in workplace. Working in a team gives us different perspective of people. It is easier to solve problem while working in a team. We can divide work and can finish before deadline. Working in a team allows for brainstorming and helps to solve difficult work. It helps to increase productivity and helps to solve problems as group of people are working on the same problem. Moreover, working in a group helps in increasing creativity and provide different ideas for the same project. We can trust each other and appreciate each other ideas. While working in a team we can clarify the ideas. Working in a team helps in managing time develop communication skills. On the other hand, there are some advantages of working alone as well. While working individually one does not have to depend on any other. In addition to this, one can work in accordance to one’s pace. One can take their own decisions and one is the sole responsible for all decisions. One can work faster and concentrate easier. No need to distribute work and there is no outside pressure. One do not has to rely on other decisions that helps to increase confidence. In conclusion, both the sides have their own advantages. It depends upon the company, work and situation that we have to work alone or in a group.
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to prefer
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while others prefer to
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individual. This essay will shed light on
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advantages
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working
in
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Working in a
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has
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advantages
in workplace.
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in a
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gives us
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different
perspective of
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people
. It is easier to solve problem while
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working
in a
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team
. We can divide
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work
and can finish
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deadline.
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in a
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allows
for brainstorming and
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to solve difficult
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work
. It
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helps
to increase productivity and
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helps
to solve problems as group of
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are
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on the same problem.
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,
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in a group
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helps
in increasing creativity and provide
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different
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ideas
for the same project. We can trust each
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other
and appreciate each
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other
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ideas
.
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working
in a
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we can clarify the
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ideas
.
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in a
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team
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helps
in managing time develop communication
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skills
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On the
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other
hand, there are
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some
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advantages
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one does not
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depend on any
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in accordance to one’s pace. One can take their
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own
decisions and one is the sole responsible for all decisions. One can
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work
faster and concentrate easier. No need to distribute
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work
and there is
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no
outside pressure. One do not
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has
to rely on
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decisions that
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helps
to increase confidence.

In conclusion
, both the sides have their
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own
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advantages
. It depends upon the
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company
,
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work
and situation that we
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work
alone or in a group.

IELTS essay People differ in their tendencies to work alone or in a team.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
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