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With the advancement of technology, individual complete all there activity using internet on smart phone without interacting people face-to-face. There may be few positive as well as negative impact on people and society. My points are discussed in the ensuing paragraph. To commence with advantage of using technology. T o begin with the foremost one is that, in this modern hectic schedule and increasing competition in the workload; access of internet has solved many problem and made the life fast and easy. For instance, people can do all the task like paying lightbill and phone bill or doing shopping by sitting on their armchair, this will save lots of time and energy and that time can be invest in doing creativity. Furthermore, technology has also made the ways of teaching. To illustrate,

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