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People believes to save taxes form their earning. Do you agree or disagree.

People believes to save taxes form their earning. 6xQ0r
As an Indian citizen, paying tax is our fundamental right. People try to keep or save as much money they earned without paying tax. From the above notation, I disagree and the reasons will be enumerated in the subsequent paragraphs. Firstly, the questions that arise here is why we earn money? why would we pay taxes? and the answer for both of the questions is to get facilities at least the minimum required facilities like food, shelter, water, clothes. By paying taxes we get these facilities in terms of ration, water supply, security, hospitals, schools and pension to old age people to meet other requirements. By escaping from paying tax, we hurdled the flow of government administration. Secondly, the question that comes to our mind is - It's our hard earn money. It should benefit my family or me. Why would I go for social service? Now the answer is by avoiding tax neither we get full benefits from that money nor our family because without tax it will be considered as black money. For hiding it we have to take lots of mental stress and if we caught all money will be gone along with that we will be punished too. But if we pay tax we will fully utilize all the remaining amount in our necessary utilities along as a good taxpayer in case of a financial emergency you are eligible to get financial aid to tackle that situation too. It's not limited up to here with the development of country and advancement in the nation, your earning will be increased too. So it's not a social service it's our true citizen duty which will repay us in every possible way like better roads, clean water, 24-hour electricity and many more. In concluding the topic, I am in favour of paying tax because it's for our good. By paying less than 10% of our income we get facilities to form law makers which cost thousands of crores. So as a true citizen I suggest you as well as request you to pay taxes on time.
As an Indian citizen,
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tax
is our fundamental right.
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People
try to
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keep
or save as much
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money
they earned without
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paying
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tax
. From the above notation, I disagree and the reasons will
be enumerated
in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly
, the questions that arise here is why we earn
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money
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why
would we pay
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taxes
?
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and
the answer for both of the questions is to
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get
facilities at least the minimum required facilities like food, shelter, water, clothes. By
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paying
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taxes
we
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get
these facilities in terms of ration, water supply, security, hospitals, schools and pension to
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old
age
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people
to
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meet
other requirements. By escaping from
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paying
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tax
, we hurdled the flow of
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government
administration.
Secondly
, the question that
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comes
to our mind is
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our
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hard
earn
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. It should benefit my family or me. Why would I go for social service?
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Now
the answer is by avoiding
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tax
neither we
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get
full benefits from that
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money
nor our family
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because
without
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tax
it will
be considered
as black
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money
. For
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hiding it
we
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have to
take lots of mental
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stress
and if we caught all
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money
will
be gone
along with that we will
be punished
too.
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But
if we pay
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tax
we will
fully
utilize all the remaining amount in our necessary utilities along as a
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good
taxpayer in case of a financial emergency you are eligible to
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get
financial aid to tackle that situation too.
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It's
not limited up to here with the development of country and advancement in the nation, your earning will
be increased
too.
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So
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it's
not a social service
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it's
our true citizen duty which will repay us in every possible way like better roads, clean water, 24-hour electricity and
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many
more. In concluding the topic, I am in
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favour
of
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paying
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tax
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because
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it's
for our
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good
. By
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paying
less than 10% of our income we
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get
facilities to form law makers which cost thousands of crores.
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So
as a true citizen I suggest you
as well
as request you to pay
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
taxes
on time.
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IELTS essay People believes to save taxes form their earning.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
347 words
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