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My opinion about the figure

My opinion about the figure pRxnm
This figure shows the process of making instant noodles. I was surprised at the amount of the process. At the same time, I thought if the manufacture use many machine for make instant noodles, consumption energy will very much. I think it gives bad impact for environment. These days global warming is getting worse and using much energy is one of the cause. This is because I have a suggestion. I think it will be able to do for this instant noodle company. It is using a machine of all good and reduce the process.
This figure
shows
the process of making instant noodles.

I
was surprised
at the amount of the process. At the same time, I
thought
if the manufacture
use
many machine
for
make
instant noodles, consumption energy will
very
much. I
think
it gives
bad
impact for environment. These days global warming is getting worse and using much energy is one of the cause. This is
because
I have a suggestion. I
think
it will be able to do for this instant noodle
company
. It is using a machine of all
good
and
reduce
the process.
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IELTS essay My opinion about the figure

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
95 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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