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PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT HAVING WEALTH BRING HAPPINESS IN LIFE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU ARGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT HAVING WEALTH BRING HAPPINESS IN LIFE. 7J6E6

Society have different opinion about the accumulation of wealth. Some people may think that financial security will bring happiness in life while many others have an opposite view. In my perspective, savings are always beneficial for the well being. However, beyond certain point, they might adversely affect the normal life. This essay will first examine how monetary assets helps in personal satisfaction before discussing its counter effects.

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