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People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up with the statement? gppg
In today's world, it is generally opined by the individuals that getting education in English language will increase their prospects of having a good job, which further facilitates better lifestyles. I completely agree with the statement that there are plenty of advantages of being literate in English. This essay will discuss how the good command over English language help an individual to secure a decent career and explore all possibilities to have better living standard. As world transforms into global hub, we need to communicate with each other and sharing a common language will make the conversation more flexible. Owing to the fact English language is acceptable in all countries make it a benevolent point to attain education in that. Moreover, it expands the job horizon of the applicant in the world market as they can work in any part of the globe. Since, most companies deals with foreign clients so they prefer employees who are fluent in English. According to research conducted by Monash University in June 2020, suggest 60% employees of the MNCs have studied from English Medium Schools. Furthermore, everyone aspires for better living standards and with good job all this is complimentary. One can acquire better infrastructure and best facilities if they earn well. In the recent years, immigration has increased tremendously to English speaking countries such as USA, Canada, and Australia which not only provide them with exceptional career opportunities but also ensures higher quality living standards. For instance, the survey of The Times newspaper shows that, more than 70% youth of developing nations wants to go to developed nations to have better life. In conclusion, English speaking professionals are more likely to land in an appropriate job secure high living standard as compared to their counterparts.
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language
will increase their prospects of having a
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good
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job
, which
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facilitates
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better
lifestyles. I completely
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agree
with the statement that there are
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plenty
of advantages of being literate in English. This essay will discuss how the
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good
command over English
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language
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help
an individual to secure a decent career and explore all possibilities to have
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better
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living
standard.

As world transforms into global hub, we need to communicate with each other and sharing a common
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language
will
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make
the conversation more flexible. Owing to the fact English
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language
is acceptable in all countries
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make
it a benevolent point to attain education in that.
Moreover
, it expands the
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job
horizon of the applicant in the world market as they can work in any part of the globe. Since, most
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companies
deals with foreign clients
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so
they prefer employees who are fluent in English. According to research conducted by Monash University in June 2020, suggest 60% employees of the
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MNCs
have studied from English Medium Schools.
Furthermore
, everyone aspires for
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better
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living
standards and with
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good
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job
all this is complimentary. One can acquire
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better
infrastructure and best facilities if they earn well. In the recent years, immigration has increased
tremendously
to
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English speaking
countries such
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as USA
, Canada, and Australia which not
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only
provide them with exceptional career opportunities
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but
also
ensures higher quality
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living
standards.
For instance
, the survey of The Times newspaper
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shows
that, more than 70% youth of developing nations wants to go to developed nations to have
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better
life.

In conclusion
,
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English speaking
professionals are more likely to land in an appropriate
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job
secure high
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living
standard as compared to their counterparts.
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IELTS essay People believe that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up with the statement?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
292 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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