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Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.

Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole. WAA0
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Pets are
morts
best friend.
Alot
only
they grue
company
to
brotert
one as l as then
probably
Howell, there are my best and
core
in
keebing
fels
Suanging
frem
distunbance
toughest
heart disease.
Il
be
blainirg
advantages and
Visadarbas
in the
Ulicenting
barqarabb


To
start
with, according to a
tunley
coy a bet com
keep
honey away from
Aaes
,
depesim
and other
boychologial
isuusn
Moreover
, it is beneficial of the animal in red as they
get
birebex
caure
and nutrition as Lull as he
gets
shelter with loving family, Pets
Jike
dogs
odos
sectorily
and out they
bruslect
their
cushes
and this
probaly
kind f
thefs
.
h
shower
love
odour
very
loyal to hit selfless

On the contrary
, as coin have two sides
so
there are several disadvantages for
ni
mals
involved in pet ownership and us debt from.
their
natural
habitect and
they
bornebime
, led caged as their freedom is
being snatched
from them. In
some
cases, they are
il
tested
by their
owndos
.
Furthermore
, they are
dare
.
of
distobonce
mainly
during the
nightMany
people
have reported dog
houling
and barking at night
asa
severe form of
stress
of pols are not vaccinated diseases like they can cause
authma
and my other Save life threatening disorders.

In Condition, despite several drawbacks of keeping a
fet
animals such as dogs are
extremely
beneficial in dealing with
resses
and
insécurities
o
modo
lifestyle.
But
, one should not treat them
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IELTS essay Many people keep dogs and cats as companions. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of pet ownership for the animals involved and for the community as a whole.

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