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people behave different when they wear different clothes.give reasons and example

people behave different when they wear different clothes. give reasons and example n6eA7

Clothes are one of the essential need for everyone. Clothes may different that means depending on the people, countries, cultures the way people dressed may vary. I believe that our behavior depends on the clothes. Many people say when we see a person that persons appearance will reflect on mind first. When we go to new place, according to their cultures we will dress up. When we wear new style of cloths that will reflect on our behavior. If we comfort with those clothes we are very happy. For example, i went to my friends marriage once. There i wore saree. That was first time for me wear saree. I feel very comfortable in that saree and i was very happy on that day with my friends. If the clothes are bad or if it is uncomfortable, situation will be worse. That uncomfortable makes us disgusting. For example, my cousin went to a pub for weekend party. There her friends forced her to wear a short frock that she never wear before. That day she didn't enjoy the party well and she was so nervous and unhappy. To conclude, this examples makes us to realize that behavior differs when wearing different clothes.

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Clothes
 are one of the essential need for everyone. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
Clothes
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different
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people
, countries, cultures the way This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 dressed may vary. I believe that our behavior depends on the clothes.

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people
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persons
 appearance will reflect on mind first
. When we go to new place, according to their cultures we will dress up. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
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wear
 new style of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmaterialgoodscottonstuff
cloths
 that will reflect on our behavior. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
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clothes
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very
 happy. For example
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i
 wore saree. That was first
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wear
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very
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 happy on that day with my friends.

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clothes
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 or if it is uncomfortable, situation will be worse. That uncomfortable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 us disgusting. For example
, my cousin went to a pub for weekend party. There her friends forced her to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwear and tear
wear
 a short frock that she never You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwear and tear
wear
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. That day she didn't enjoy the party Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).well, and
well and
 she was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 nervous and unhappy.

To conclude
, this examples This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 us to realize that behavior differs when wearing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwardrobegarbregaliaattiresportswear
clothes
. 