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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? people are now less happy or less satisfied with their lives than in the past.

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It has long been a controversy among people that of the two ages of today and past in which one people were more happier. However, the happiness is a mystery wrapped in an enigma, as far as I am concerned, answering to this question is imperative as it deals with the satisfaction of one`s life. Just as the english proverb goes '' a coin has two sides '' those who take the opposite view are partially reasonable. Notwithstanding with all snags in the past, people were happier than now in many aspects of their life. The first plain reason for my propensity is that people did not have a lot of stresses about their jobs in the past. A prime example from my own experience may shed some light to this point; I remember when I was a kid, my father was never worried about the possibility of firing from his job, as he worked for himself not in an office. Nowadays, modern people are very insecure about the stability of their jobs, and this modern kinds of stresses are added to the old stresses which reduce the happiness in the present day. The second reason that I should mention is that the relationships were so closer in the past compared to the present day. According to a research which was conducted by one of the most reputable universities in my country, people were more satisfied with their level of relationships compared to today. Not only the quality of relationships has decreased, but also the quantity of relationships has decreased too. Last but not the least, Peoples had less information about the better conditions of other regions of earth. By this, I mean people just live their own life in a closed area which there were no considerably interacting with other developed countries. Some critics say that western culture encourages people to get more money in order to have a better life which will increase the sadness in the non-developed countries such as China and India. To conclude, considering the above reasons, people are much more happier than before as they had more job stability, relationships and more importantly had less affected by materialistics ideas.
It has long been a controversy among
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that of the two ages of
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today
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in which one
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were
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more happier
.
However
, the happiness is a mystery wrapped in an enigma, as far as I
am concerned
, answering to this question is imperative as it deals with the satisfaction of
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as the
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english
proverb goes '' a coin has two sides '' those who take the opposite view are
partially
reasonable.

Notwithstanding with all snags in the
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past
,
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people
were happier than
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now
in
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aspects of their
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life
. The
first
plain reason for my propensity is that
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people
did not have
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a lot of
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stresses
about their
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jobs
in the
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past
. A prime example from my
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own
experience may shed
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light to this point; I remember when I was a kid, my father was never worried about the possibility of firing from his
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job
, as he worked for himself not in an office. Nowadays, modern
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people
are
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very
insecure about the stability of their
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jobs
, and this modern kinds of
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stresses
are
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added
to the
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old
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stresses
which
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reduce
the happiness in the present day.

The second reason that I should mention is that the
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relationships
were
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so
closer in the
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past
compared to the present day. According to a research which
was conducted
by one of the most reputable universities in my country,
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people
were more satisfied with their level of
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relationships
compared to
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today
. Not
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only
the quality of
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relationships
has decreased,
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but
also
the quantity of
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relationships
has decreased too. Last
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not the least,
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Peoples
had less information about the better conditions of other regions of earth. By this, I mean
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people
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just
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live
their
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own
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life
in a closed area which there were no
considerably
interacting with other
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developed countries
.
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Some
critics say that western culture encourages
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people
to
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get
more money in order to have a better
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life
which will increase the sadness in the non-
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developed countries
such as China and India.

To conclude
, considering the above reasons,
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people
are much
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more happier
than
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before
as they had more
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job
stability,
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relationships
and more
importantly
had less
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affected
by
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materialistics
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ideas
.

IELTS essay people are now less happy or less satisfied with their lives than in the past.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
365 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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