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integrated essay tpo19

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In the reading passage, the writer claims that buzzers has many critics and should be banned. The speaker, however, thinks that buzzers do not have such lacks as the writer says. And he uses the following three reasons to support his view. First, although the writer says that customers will get wrong information if they do not know whether a person be paid to praise the product, the speaker argues that it seems that the buzzers do not give customers true information, but in fact, it is the company that pays to those people who really buy the product, and paise highly to the service and quality of the product. So, the information be given by these buzzers is often reliable. Second, contrary to the statement of the writer that costumers listen to the buzzer with less critically, the speaker thinks that customers often buy the product after they try it, only if it is good, they will buy it. Finally, the writer states that customers will become less trustful to the people around them.

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many
 critics and should be banned
. The speaker, however
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
 that buzzers do not have such lacks as the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
 says. And he This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 the following three reasons to support his view.

First
, although the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
 says that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 information if they do not know whether a person be paid
 to praise the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
, the speaker argues that it seems that the buzzers do not give You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 true information, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in fact, it is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 that pays to those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
, and Possible spelling mistake found.pieceraisepraisepausepiesPaige
paise
highly
 to the service and quality of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the information be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 by these buzzers is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 reliable.

Second, contrary to the statement of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
 that costumers listen to the buzzer with less critically
, the speaker This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonsassumesbelievesconsiders
thinks
 that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 after they try it, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 if it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
, they will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 it.

Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcorrespondentauthorreportercriticcolumnistpoet
writer
 states that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclientconsumerpatronpurchaser
customers
 will become less trustful to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 around them. 