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Write about the following topic. People are never satisfied and always want more. In what ways is this a good thing and in what ways is this a bad thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

"Satisfaction guaranteed" is a slogan raised by stakeholders everywhere people can go; however, there is almost nothing continuously satisfying. Continous fulfilment is an unreachable goal, as people are never satisfied and constantly seek more. Ever seeking gratification is considered the critical element for improvement and having a better future; nevertheless, this daunting process has negative consequences of unfulfillment and unhappiness. Unsatisfaction is a crucial element in the soar evolving world that could unleash innovation and advancement's inner potentials. For example, the fast evolution in the internet technology connections, from the first generation to the fifth generation, in a short time is due to looking for more from people side for better and timely manner services. Therefore, the vast benefits of this enormous advancement would not be possible without the want for more. Thus, unfulfillment has positive consequences from that angle and could be considered a better future promotion. On the other hand, lack of happiness and settlement are the drawbacks of dissatisfaction resulting from searching for more all the time. For instance, many people buy a new version of the iPhone while their iPhones still in excellent working condition. The previous example's market pressure is abusing the peoples' need for more satisfaction and yield to more depressed society members. So, seeking more joy would be a disastrous form that sense. In conclusion, while needing more could a virtue and a potential for having a better future, it also can lead to depression and despair. It is recommended that individuals should have a balance between being happy with what they have and what they are looking for to be contented and satisfied.
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Satisfaction guaranteed
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
is a slogan raised by stakeholders everywhere
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people
can go;
however
, there is almost nothing
continuously
satisfying.
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Continous
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fulfilment
is an unreachable goal, as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are never satisfied and
constantly
seek more. Ever seeking gratification
is considered
the critical element for improvement and having a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
future;
nevertheless
, this daunting process has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
consequences of
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unfulfillment
and unhappiness.

Unsatisfaction is a crucial element in the soar evolving world that could unleash innovation and advancement's inner potentials.
For example
, the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
evolution in the internet technology connections, from the
first
generation to the fifth generation, in a short time is due to looking for more from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
side for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
and timely manner services.
Therefore
, the vast benefits of this enormous advancement would not be possible without the want for more.
Thus
,
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unfulfillment
has
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
The usual preposition to use after "consequences" is not "from". Did you mean "consequences of", "consequences for", or "consequences on"?
consequences from
that angle and could
be considered
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
future promotion.

On the other hand
, lack of happiness and settlement are the drawbacks of dissatisfaction resulting from searching for more all the time.
For instance
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a new version of the iPhone while their iPhones
still
in excellent working condition. The previous example's market pressure is abusing the peoples' need for more satisfaction and yield to more depressed society members.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, seeking more joy would be a disastrous form that sense.

In conclusion
, while needing more could a virtue and a potential for having a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
better
future, it
also
can lead to depression and despair. It
is recommended
that individuals should have a balance between being happy with what they have and what they are looking for to
be contented
and satisfied.
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IELTS essay People are never satisfied and always want more. In what ways is this a good thing and in what ways is this a bad thing?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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