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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

Plenty of food that has been provided from different shops and restaurant are being wasted. This essay will discuss on the reason why the people are misused it and brought some solution to decrease the issue. First of all, the main cause for wasting of this resource is the users are not good enough in considering their limit. Therefore, they prefer to buy more than the necessary amount of food. In addition to this the trend of eating on the road or inside a car also another mentionable reason. As a demonstration most of the United Kingdom people use eat on the street. After they had enough they throw the rest. However, if they would have experienced the culture of eating on the proper place (such as canteen or dining room), then they could keep it and can be eaten whenever needed. Otherwise this can lead to a loss of more food. Secondly, in order to control and reduce the amount of food wastage variety of sector’s including the government must have involved and take their own responsibility. And the factories that supply packed food must monitor the size of their product by applying some survey. For instance, we can take the biggest packed food factory in Sheffield that has got too many clients. The critical issue with this company is the criteria made by themselves are based on the taste of the products instead of being the ingredient and the size of each item. Furthermore, the government need to set a law that could ceased street feeding. In my view, this two main points will have an important role in minimizing the problem. To sum up everything that has been stated so far, the very first reason for misusing of food is are lack of responsibility from individual person and also the government should have make a strict rule for the people and the suppliers.
Plenty
of
food
that has
been provided
from
different
shops and restaurant are
being wasted
. This essay will discuss on the reason why the
people
are misused
it and brought
some
solution to decrease the issue.

First of all
, the main cause for wasting of this resource is the users are not
good
enough
in considering their limit.
Therefore
, they prefer to
buy
more than the necessary amount of
food
.
In addition
to this the trend of eating on the road or inside a car
also
another mentionable reason.
As
a demonstration most of the United Kingdom
people
use
eat on the street.
After
they had
enough
they throw the rest.
However
, if they
would have experienced
the culture of eating on the proper place (such as canteen or dining room), then they could
keep
it and can
be eaten
whenever needed.
Otherwise
this can lead to a loss of more food.

Secondly
, in order to control and
reduce
the amount of
food
wastage variety of sector’s including the
government
must
have involved and take their
own
responsibility. And the factories that supply packed
food
must
monitor the size of their product by applying
some
survey.
For instance
, we can take the biggest packed
food
factory in Sheffield that has
got
too
many
clients. The critical issue with this
company
is the criteria made by themselves
are based
on the taste of the products
instead
of being the ingredient and the size of each item.
Furthermore
, the
government
need to set a law that could
ceased
street feeding. In my view, this two main points will have an
important
role in minimizing the problem.

To sum up everything that has
been stated
so
far, the
very
first
reason for misusing of
food
is are lack of responsibility from individual person and
also
the
government
should have
make
a strict
rule
for the
people
and the suppliers.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6.0
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