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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. It is argued that people tend to read articles online without paying, so in the future people will no longerinstead of buying paper books or newspapers. For many reasons I partly agree with the prediction; , the free and informative features of ebooks will make online reading a winner in the end, but paper books will still have a role. The technology revolution has led people to receive news and download books online, . It breaking up the distance barriers, so that the local news can spread to all over the world. For instance, , with the internet Taiwan’s great prevention policy under the epidemic has becomebeen known by the world. AdditionallyMoreover, the information online is more accessible. With the computers and digital devices, people can easily get a great deallot of information. They oOnly need to connect to the internet and they can search for what they want. As an example, many people are learning new skills from the internet. The internet is like a rich and free library waiting for you to explore. The convenience brought by the internet has led tothe information being updated more quickly. Some important messages will be ignored in the thousands of pieces of information now available. AdditionallyAlso, the internet hasit changeds people's reading habits, ; people tend to absorb manylots of messages in athe short time. Some people can no longer read the deeper knowledge. InOn this way, we cancould see the importance of the paper books. When we are reading the paper books we won’t be disturbed by the notifications from social media. We can be more concentrated more on the book’s content. In conclusion, I agree that reading online without paying will partly replace printed books or newspaper. But reading paper books can make people more calm and think more deeply.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
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in the future
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books
or newspapers. For
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reasons I partly
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agree
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,
the free and informative features of
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ebooks
will
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make
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online
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reading
a winner in the
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end
,
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paper
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books
will
still
have a role.

The technology revolution has led
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people
to receive news and download
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books
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online
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, .
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It breaking
up the distance barriers,
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so
that the local news can spread to all over the world.
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,
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,
with the internet Taiwan’s great prevention policy under the epidemic has
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becomebeen
known by the world.
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AdditionallyMoreover
, the
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information
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online
is more accessible. With the computers and digital devices,
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people
can
easily
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get
a great
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deallot
of
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information
. They
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oOnly
need to connect to the
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internet and
they can search for what they want. As an example,
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many
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people
are learning new
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skills
from the internet. The internet is like a rich and free library waiting for you to explore.

The convenience brought by the internet has led
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tothe
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information
being updated
more
quickly
.
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Some
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important
messages will be
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ignored
in the thousands of pieces of
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information
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now
available.
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AdditionallyAlso
, the internet
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hasit
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changeds
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people
's
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reading
habits, ;
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people
tend to absorb
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manylots
of messages in
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athe
short time.
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Some
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people
can no longer read the deeper knowledge.
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this way, we
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the importance of the paper
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books
.
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When
we are
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reading
the paper
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books
we won’t
be disturbed
by the notifications from social media. We can be more concentrated more on the
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book’s
content.

In conclusion
, I
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agree
that
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reading
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online
without paying will partly replace printed
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books
or newspaper.
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But
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reading
paper
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books
can
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make
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people
more calm and
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think
more
deeply
.

IELTS essay In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
317 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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