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People are naturally polite

People are naturally polite KlrX0
Polite is a good manner and known to obey social standards in communication. People are not natural polite, but have to learn and improve. Firstly, the family has effected on different ways of people polite. They always advise about the manner and right things or bad to avoid when we still child. Family members as an example for us to learn. Secondly, we are more experiencing and more receiving at schools and communities.
Polite is a
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manner and known to obey social standards in communication.
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People
are not natural polite,
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learn and
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, the family has effected on
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ways of
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polite. They always advise about the manner and right things or
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to avoid when we
still
child. Family members as an example for us to learn.
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, we are more experiencing and more receiving at schools and communities.
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IELTS essay People are naturally polite

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  American English
1 paragraphs
73 words
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