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People are getting used to seeing images of disasters and violence shown on TV news programmers. Why is this ? What are the effects of this on individuals and the society ?

People are getting used to seeing images of disasters and violence shown on TV news programmers. Why is this? What are the effects of this on individuals and the society? YkJwm
Television has an important function in both giving information through the media and offering enjoyment to viewers. Without a doubt, it has a positive impact on an individual's life by conveying broad knowledge and information from all over the world. However, the dangers of disseminating violent content cannot be overlooked. This essay will go through the elements that contributed to the problem as well as the negative implications for the community. The most obvious explanation for this is that television networks aim to boost their Television Rating Point. If a channel has a high TRP, it receives more advertisements and thus generates more income. Thus, the broadcasters must present such spectacular material. Second, people expect to be well-informed about everything that is going on in society. Therefore, the media must present all of this to their audience. Finally, people nowadays prefer to watch action, thriller, and superhero films with numerous violent sequences over other genres presented on television. The most obvious impact is that humans have a proclivity to grasp unpleasant things more readily than happy thoughts. Teenagers and young people are the most impacted by these performances since they have an imperious temperament and a desire to show off. As a result, people readily actualize certain impolite actions on TV and think it's a fantastic thing to exhibit their personality or their favorite movie figure, but it's hazardous and drives them to behave aggressively or even commit a crime. For example, in October, a 24-year-old Japanese man dressed as the Joker attacked 17 passengers on a Tokyo train. According to the report, this individual is a fan of the Joker character from the Batman films. This is one of the reasons why the prevalence of juvenile criminality has recently grown. Furthermore, watching disaster news on television with the number of dead bodies caused by war or earthquake exasperates the elderly, women, and children. They are triggered by worry and stress. For pregnant women with poor mental health, for example, witnessing tragedies might result in fetal derangement and, in some circumstances, miscarriage. In brief, television has multiple sides impacting our lives, so when viewing any program, we should choose information wisely to avoid unwanted consequences. Furthermore, TV producers should create an age limit depending on the harshness of movies and news to prevent some groups from watching them, particularly teenagers or people with health problems.
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Television
has an
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important
function in both giving information through the media and offering enjoyment to viewers. Without a doubt, it has a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
impact on an individual's life by conveying broad knowledge and information from all over the world.
However
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
dangers
of disseminating violent content cannot
be overlooked
. This essay will go through the elements that contributed to the problem
as well
as the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
implications for the community.

The most obvious explanation for this is that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
networks aim to boost their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Television
Rating Point. If a channel has a high TRP, it receives more advertisements and
thus
generates more income.
Thus
, the broadcasters
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
present such spectacular material. Second,
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to be well-informed about everything
that is
going on in society.
Therefore
, the media
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must
present all of this to their audience.
Finally
,
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people
nowadays prefer to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
action, thriller, and superhero films with numerous violent sequences over other genres presented on television.

The most obvious impact is that humans have a proclivity to grasp unpleasant things more
readily
than happy thoughts.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Teenagers
and young
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people
are the most impacted by these performances since they have an imperious temperament and a desire to
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show
off.
As a result
,
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people
readily
actualize certain impolite actions on TV and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
it's a fantastic thing to exhibit their personality or their favorite movie figure,
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but
it's hazardous and drives them to behave
aggressively
or even commit a crime.
For example
, in October, a 24-year-
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old
Japanese
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
dressed as the Joker attacked 17 passengers on a Tokyo train. According to the report, this individual is a fan of the Joker character from the Batman films. This is one of the reasons why the prevalence of juvenile criminality has recently grown.
Furthermore
, watching disaster news on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
television
with the number of dead bodies caused by war or earthquake exasperates the elderly, women, and children. They
are triggered
by worry and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stress
. For pregnant women with poor mental health,
for example
, witnessing tragedies might result in fetal derangement and, in
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some
circumstances, miscarriage.

In brief
,
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television
has multiple sides impacting our
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lives
,
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so
when viewing any program, we should choose information
wisely
to avoid unwanted consequences.
Furthermore
, TV producers should create an age limit depending on the harshness of movies and news to
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prevent
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some
groups from watching them,
particularly
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teenagers
or
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people
with health problems.
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IELTS essay People are getting used to seeing images of disasters and violence shown on TV news programmers. Why is this? What are the effects of this on individuals and the society?

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