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People are eating a lot of foreign food instead of local produce food do you think that the advantages of eating foreign food and more than its harm

People are eating a lot of foreign food instead of local produce food do you think that the advantages of eating foreign food and more than its harm W86p0
In this modern era, individual enjoy a variety of delicious food on their own choice while they do lot of effort for a better food stuff and survival. masses are consuming oversea cuisines alternative of residential produce a eatable however, according to me the negative aspects of eating foreign food are more than its positive. To embark with, people consume different kind of food according to their taste. however, the first and foremost reason when they taste different international food it help them to enhance knowledge about different culture and traditional food. such as Chinese and Italian American dishes of other country. due to this, people can get a lot of experience about whole word while it also increase mind power about different kind of taste. secondly, on the condition that when they follow trend of different country food it increased unity as well as trade relationship between two countries in this way income of globe profitable such as international food company restaurants and so on. As example in 2017 USA and China export and import of trade was inclined like exchanging of goods as a result it have two rows in income of both nation. Probing further there are many disadvantages of this ideology which cannot be ignored. To elaborate, the foreign meal are very expensive and poverty line mobs cannot able to buy them because all taxisation include at the time export. Due to this processing. Moreover, this kind of food make with unhealthy material. which cannot be digested easily and cause harmful diseases such as diabetes, food poisoning and obesity so on. In this way, people suffered from such kind of illness. At last when individuals enjoy abroad meal. so locally food restaurant and canteens do not gain any profit from this business. In addition to this, In 2019indian food produced factory factory face 45%loss in state food.
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on their
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choice while they do
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lot of
effort for a better
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stuff and survival.
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masses
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aspects of eating foreign
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are more than its
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positive
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people
consume
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different
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kind
of
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food
according to their taste.
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however
, the
first
and foremost reason when they taste
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different
international
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food
it
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help
them to enhance knowledge about
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different
culture and traditional
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food
.
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such
as Chinese and Italian American dishes of other country.
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due
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people
can
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a lot of
experience about whole word while it
also
increase mind power about
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different
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kind
of taste.
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secondly
, on the condition that when they follow trend of
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different
country
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it increased unity
as well
as trade relationship between two countries in this way income of globe profitable such as international
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food
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company
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on. As example in 2017 USA and China export and import of trade
was inclined
like exchanging of
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goods
as a result
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further
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disadvantages of this ideology which cannot be
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expensive and poverty line mobs
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all
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taxisation
include at the time export. Due to this processing.
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of
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food
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with unhealthy material.
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which
cannot
be digested
easily
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poisoning and obesity
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on. In this way,
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suffered from such
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kind
of illness. At last when individuals enjoy abroad meal.
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so
locally
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restaurant and canteens do not gain any profit from this business.
In addition
to this, In 2019indian
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food
produced
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factory factory
face 45%loss in state
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IELTS essay People are eating a lot of foreign food instead of local produce food do you think that the advantages of eating foreign food and more than its harm

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