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Peers have a greater influence on students than teacher do

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In student's life, each person they meet have a certain effect. At school, teachers play an important role, who are providing more knowledge and skill that their students need. Teacher gives a lot of useful advise on how to have a best result, have a good life. . . Moreover peers have a greater influence on students. Example, a student want to T-shirts and behave like their friends. As the same age, they participated in more activities like: learning activities, social activities, club. They share with their friend about not only learning but also loving, habiting. In conclusion, i agree with statement that peers have a greater influence on students than teacher do.
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role, who are providing more knowledge and
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skill
that their
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need. Teacher gives
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useful advise on how to have
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best result, have a
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students
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student
want to T-shirts and behave like their friends. As the same age, they participated in more activities like: learning activities, social activities, club. They share with their friend about not
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learning
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IELTS essay Peers have a greater influence on students than teacher do

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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