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Peers have a greater influence on students than teacher do

Peers have a greater influence on students than teacher do BYNaw

In student's life, each person they meet have a certain effect. At school, teachers play an important role, who are providing more knowledge and skill that their students need. Teacher gives a lot of useful advise on how to have a best result, have a good life. . . Moreover peers have a greater influence on students. Example, a student want to T-shirts and behave like their friends. As the same age, they participated in more activities like: learning activities, social activities, club. They share with their friend about not only learning but also loving, habiting. In conclusion, i agree with statement that peers have a greater influence on students than teacher do.

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