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Parents should there own children spend less time in the study and they should say a their children spend timemost time in activities do you agree or disagree

Parents should there own children spend less time in the study and they should say a their children spend timemost time in activities 52PJD

Doing study d is most important for children and doing activities are most crucial for children both are important for children. I will discuss both views in next paragraph. Study is most important for children because they can improve skill with study. Children should spend less time in study and they play activities. Children make on life in activities. For example, in many countries children give preference to activities and they are earning many money in activities.

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important
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 and doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
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important
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. I will discuss both views in next
 paragraph. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
Study
 is most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withapplicationreviewinquirydebateresearchcourse
study
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
Children
 should spend less time in Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).study, and
study and
 they play You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
Children
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 on life in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
. For example
, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 countries You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 give preference to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).activities, and
activities and
 they are earning Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much money", "a good deal of money".much moneya good deal of money
many money
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
. 