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Parents should spend time with their children to help their task easier. Do you agree with this statement?

Parents should spend time with their children to help their task easier. x8a59
For helping children to make their home work parents ought to extend their spending time with them. I firmly agree with this statement. It makes children more courageous about doing their task and also increases their love to their family. Moreover they starts understand the value of their parents. when children get help from their parents, they become more interest to do the specific work and they do their job like a sincere person. Getting more time from their parents also make them enthusiasts. It does work like fuel. some reachers from BD has finished an experiment relationship between childers and their parents. They have found those who got proper time and support from their parents, they do always better and some of them who got plenty of time from parents, they always placed on the first row. Therefore, The reachers said, it is very important to get sufficient time from their parents to become a successful kid. People learn how to conduct with others and the values of precious things from their childhood. If they find proper their parents are helpful for them, they will learn to be helpful to their parents and with others people when they will be younger. That also makes them oblige to think why parents are more special to us. A lot of country already started encouraging parents to spend time with their children so that children can grow up with all privilege as much as they need to be. Parents are the first teachers and role models to their children. As much they will be eager to help children for doing their task, children will be motivated and took their task like a game and they could be able to it everything easily.
For helping
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make
their home work
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parents
ought to extend their spending
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time
with them. I
firmly
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agree
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makes
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children
more courageous about doing their task and
also
increases their
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love
to their family.
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they
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starts
understand the value of their parents.

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when
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children
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get
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help
from their
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parents
, they become more interest to do the specific
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work and
they do their job like a sincere person. Getting more
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time
from their
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parents
also
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make
them enthusiasts. It does work like fuel.
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some
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reachers
from BD
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proper
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time
and support from their
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parents
, they do always better and
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to
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sufficient
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time
from their
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parents
to become a successful kid.

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People
learn how to conduct with others and the values of precious things from their childhood. If they find proper their
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parents
are helpful for them, they will learn to be helpful to their
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and with others
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when they will be younger. That
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are more special to us.
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children
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that
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children
can grow up with all privilege as much as they need to be.

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first
teachers and role models to their
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children
. As much they will be eager to
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help
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children
for doing their task,
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will
be motivated
and took their task like a
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game and
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easily
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IELTS essay Parents should spend time with their children to help their task easier.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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