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parents should not attend the course to be good parents

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Being a good parent is one of the most essential things in life. Having a child entails parental responsibility for the rest of the child's life. Many people believe that parents should take courses to prepare themselves for such a large responsibility. I completely disagree with this opinion. First of all, I believe that due to job schedules or other duties that interfere with day-to-day life, not all parents are able to attend these classes. There are some parents who are not able to be there for their children. They may be too busy with work or have to care for their elderly parents. This can end up causing a lot of stress on both parties. Parents should not attend the course to become good parents because they may end up feeling even more stressed, and it may affect their ability to provide for their children. And even if they can attend them, it is unlikely that they will be able to successfully follow through on what they learned in class after they return home because of life’s distractions. Secondly, completing a course on how to be a good parent will lead to stereotyped family life. I believe that a parent's way of parenting should come from the inside, not from a course. And because each family is different, there is no one-size-fits-all solution to parenting. And every parent has their own way of raising their children which means that there are no right or wrong ways to do it.
Being a
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is one of the most essential things in
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. Having a child entails parental responsibility for the rest of the child's
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should take
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courses
to prepare themselves for such a large responsibility. I completely disagree with this opinion.
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, not all
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are able to attend these classes. There are
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who are not able to be there for their children. They may be too busy with work or
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have to
care for their elderly
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parents
. This can
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up causing
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a lot of
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on both parties.
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should not attend the
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to become
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they may
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up feeling even more
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, and it may affect their ability to provide for their children. And even if they can attend them, it is unlikely that they will be able to
successfully
follow through on what they learned in
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class
after they return home
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of
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life’s
distractions.
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, completing a
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course
on how to be a
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good
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parent
will lead to stereotyped family
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life
. I believe that a parent's way of parenting should
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come
from the inside, not from a
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course
. And
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because
each family is
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different
, there is no one-size-fits-all solution to parenting. And every
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parent
has their
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own
way of raising their children which means that there are no right or
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wrong
ways to do it.
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IELTS essay parents should not attend the course to be good parents

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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