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Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not by local people what are the reasons how it can be increased through more locals

Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not by local people what are the reasons how it can be increased through more locals Owa3d
It can be seen that citizen do not paper to go to museum and historical sites than tourists. This essay will discuss about some caustive factors and some suggestion to attract inhabitans towards this palaces First and foremost, boring because it takes much time to see the Museum and historical sites because it has vast area due to busy schedule locals do not prefer to visit the same place And watch the somethings therefore less footfall to museum and old monuments. Secondly due to be tent price of entry tickets locals do not opted to spend money for watch the same thing. Consequences civilians avoid the antique places they wish to allocated per finance on other things. To develop the interest first of all Museum should have blend of modern Art for extends modem two sides has been. Starting to display wax statue of celebrities in france. Secondary School coach to organise trip to Asian places because of to create students interest towards museum and historical places. Moreover Museum authority should reduce the rates of tickets to encourage the people to old infrastucture. In conclusion there are various reasons why citizens ward museum and historical places such as high price of ticket displayed at is same from years. Museum and schools can take few steps for increased the people like display the modern art and reduce the price of entry ticket
It can be
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seen
that citizen do not paper to go to
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museum
and
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historical
sites than tourists. This essay will discuss about
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some
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caustive
factors and
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some
suggestion to attract
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inhabitans
towards this
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palaces


First
and foremost, boring
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because
it takes much time to
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see
the
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Museum
and
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historical
sites
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because
it has vast area due to busy schedule locals do not prefer to visit the same place

And
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watch
the somethings
therefore
less footfall to
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museum
and
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old
monuments.
Secondly
due to be tent price of entry
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tickets
locals do not opted to spend money for
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watch
the same thing. Consequences civilians avoid the antique
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places
they wish to allocated per finance on other things.

To develop the interest
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first of all
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Museum
should have blend of modern Art for extends modem two sides has been. Starting to display wax statue of celebrities in
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france
. Secondary School coach to
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organise
trip to Asian
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places
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because
of to create students interest towards
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museum
and
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historical
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places
.
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Moreover
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Museum
authority should
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reduce
the rates of
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tickets
to encourage the
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people
to
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old
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infrastucture
.

In conclusion
there are various reasons why citizens ward
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museum
and
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historical
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places
such as high price of
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ticket
displayed at is same from years.
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Museum
and schools can take few steps for increased the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
like display the modern art and
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reduce
the price of entry
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ticket
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IELTS essay Many museum and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not by local people what are the reasons how it can be increased through more locals

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
230 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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