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Parents should be responsible the school and the society have been debatable always. Others however, believe that school is the place to learn this. But that is the wrong because both should resposible. Teach children how to be good members of society. In My opinion both an equal necessary role. It is considered that parents are a child’s first guardian. Whenever teachers are also responsible child’s first guardian. Parents Should be teach children. Childrens are not known that in society. And we are behaviour very bad. There are so many people stay in society. Their behaviour not well. And we do not know what his nature. We do not know about society so that we should learn from our parents how to live with society. First at all, we should greet with smile in society. Whenever we are meet all friends then we should treat every friend well. Second, we should respect of elders. Then finally, when anyone needs help. We should get ready and never we should not refuse to help. Family and society a better place to live in. On the other hand, school have their own part. Children spend six to seven hours in school. Children’s atmoshphere depends on teachers and friends. We should always follow the rule of school. So that this is the maintain health and to have faith in god. Discipline is priorities in school. Also, habit of sincerity and honesty is taught. And we should honesty in apologizing for mistakes. To close up, parents and teachers should to build a good society member out of chidren and that school is the place to learn this.
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should be responsible the
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school
and the
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society
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school
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both should
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resposible
. Teach
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children
how to be
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good
members of
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society
. In My opinion both an equal necessary role.

It
is considered
that
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parents
are a child’s
first
guardian.
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Whenever
teachers are
also
responsible child’s
first
guardian.
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Parents
Should be
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children
.
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Childrens
are not known that in
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society
. And we are
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behaviour
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society
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so
that we should learn from our
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parents
how to
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with
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society
.
First
at all, we should greet with smile in
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society
.
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Whenever
we are
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meet
all friends then we should treat every friend well. Second, we should respect of elders. Then
finally
, when anyone needs
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help
. We should
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ready and never we should not refuse to
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help
. Family and
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society
a better place to
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live
in.

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,
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school
have their
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spend six to seven hours in
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the maintain
health and to have faith in god. Discipline is priorities in
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school
.
Also
, habit of sincerity and honesty
is taught
. And we
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should honesty
in apologizing for mistakes.

To close up,
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parents
and teachers should to build a
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good
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member out of
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chidren
and that
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IELTS essay parents responsebility for their parents discuss them decisions

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
272 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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