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Parents put lot of pressure on children to succeed. Do you think this is a good or bad thing?

Parents put lot of pressure on children to succeed. Do you think this is a good or bad thing? BJLB9

Nowadays parents force their children to succeed. This has increased due to more competition and parents are worried that their children might be left out. This will provide the logical conclusion. Putting pressure on children can have many harmful effects such as they can get depressed and face mental health issues. Every child has own level of intelligence and own ways to work. Success doesn't matter if the person is not happy. On the other hand, this can be beneficial as children will work more hard and try their best to succeed. They know they have no other choice so they don't waste their time and pay attention to their studies so that they become successful in future. On balance, I think it has more benefits as compared to its drawbacks as a child should be encouraged to succeed and try it's bes to do well as this will benefit the child the most in the future.

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 out. This will provide the logical conclusion.

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many
 harmful effects such as they can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
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own
 level of intelligence and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
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 ways to work. Success doesn't matter if the person is not happy.

On the other hand
, this can be beneficial as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
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so
 they don't waste their time and pay attention to their studies This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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 it has more benefits as compared to its drawbacks as a child should be encouraged
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 to do well as this will benefit the child the most in the future. 