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Write a paragraph about your bad habits and how to give up

Write a paragraph about your bad habits and how to give up PVkG2

There is a dozen of times that my parents warn me about my bad habit which is using mobile phone before going to bed. It is the fact that using smart phone is really harmful to eyes in particular and to health in general. Specially, using mobile phone before sleep makes me sleepless because my brain becomes active and can't rest. As the result, I always wake up late in the morning and my eyesight becomes worse. I know I should stop this situation, so I ask myself to use it just one hour in the evening and 2 hours before sleeping, I won't take it at all. I have followed this way for a while and I find it better that I can fall asleep easier.

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bad
 habit which is using mobile phone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 going to bed. It is the fact that using smart phone is really
 harmful to eyes in particular
 and to health in general
. Specially
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before
 sleep This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me sleepless This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my brain becomes active and can't rest. As the result, I always wake up late in the morning and my eyesight becomes worse. I know I should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 this situation, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I ask myself to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 one hour in the evening and 2 hours This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 sleeping, I won't take it at all. I have followed this way for a while and I find it better that I can fall asleep easier. 