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Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. Do you agree or disagree?

Parents of obese children should be punished for making them fat. EkRB

The relative significance to penalty to father and mother of lymphatic kiddies due to made them fatty is a matter of discussion. I fully agree with the statement in the sake of their overtake care them the children gradually lose their healthy body shape. Obviously, all parents love their child. But they become so affectionate that, they does not realize, they spoiling their kid. In addition, sometimes they try to feed nutrias food to them unnecessarily. Consequently, By over accepting food stuffs, they become fatty. Furthermore, they are away from any physical activities because of parents not let them go. For example, nowadays, a large percentage of toddlers are facing obesity mainly in wealthy countries. However, parents committing these, nevertheless they have no penance at all. Hence, governments of various nations have to take initiatives to develop consciousness among the people. After that, the authorities should apply compensation. Most importantly, governments department can be imposed a huge economic fine for exceeding the weight of their child for explicit limit. In conclusion, my opinion is to create a legislation to protect our future offspring through a hygienic growth by enforcing fine to the parents whose are failed to control the weight of their children.

The relative significance to penalty to father and mother of lymphatic kiddies due to made them fatty is a matter of discussion. I fully
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement in the sake of their overtake care them the children gradually
 lose their healthy body shape.

Obviously
, all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 their child. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 they become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 affectionate that, they The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "do"do
does
 not realize, Did you mean "they're spoiling", "they are spoiling", or "they were spoiling"?they're spoilingthey are spoilingthey were spoiling
they spoiling
 their kid. In addition
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 they try to feed nutrias food to them unnecessarily
. Consequently
, By over accepting food stuffs, they become fatty. Furthermore
, they are away from any physical activities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 them go. For example
, nowadays, a large percentage of toddlers are facing obesity mainly
 in wealthy countries.

However
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 committing these, nevertheless
 they have no penance at all. Hence
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 of various nations This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take initiatives to develop consciousness among the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. After that, the authorities should apply compensation. Most importantly
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 department can be imposed
 a huge economic fine for exceeding the weight of their child for explicit limit.

In conclusion
, my opinion is to create a legislation to protect our future offspring through a hygienic growth by enforcing fine to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfathermother
parents
 whose are failed
 to control the weight of their children. 