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Parents are too permissive with their children

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Psychological think parent should be permissive with their children. Certainly, children need love but how to do child-rearing is more important. Parents should have law about nurturing. Some of parents think their childhood can cross the street and return home after school: while their children roam the street and do whatever their want. This is wrong. Or in another example, when teenager want to get party, their parents should go from home because parents disrupted their happiness. This is wrong too. The best treat is the psychological shouted to parents do want they should have done. Parents should control and check their children if this treating is a little harsh. In living with parent, children should know their position. They must obey from parents until they will grow up and can recognize wrong and right.

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