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Parents are the best teachers.Discuss and give your opinion.

Parents are the best teachers. Discuss and give your opinion. qL17E
Without any doubt, public has been split into two groups with distinct mindset. This has become a debatable issue whether, parents can do better than teachers regarding children's development or not. I tend to believe with former view and in this essay I will going to elaborate this. First of all, Teacher is not merely a person who takes a textbook and reads from that to students. Rather teacher is someone who teaches all the things what need in advance step. Morality, intricates of life, value of time, subject of matter, Physics, Biology and etcetera, Which can not be learn by any academic book. Only a true guide can guide you through all of these. Now, It is easy to compare parents and teachers since we have understood the authorities of a ideal mentor. The things that we learn from our parents are incomparable. I am denying that the knowledge gain from teacher is invaluable but how to survive, talk, distinguish bad from well, and a number of life lessons could acquire from our keeper. Parents sacrifice many things just to ensure a better life of their children. To illustrate, take a case of student who can not able to pay the fees of study due to scarcity of funds. In this situation beloved tutor would rarely come forward whilst parents would manage resources from anywhere. To sum up, The lessons of academic teachers are great valuable which helps to build a bright future whereas, parents upbring their children with great nurture as socially and emotionally.
Without any doubt, public has
been split
into two groups with distinct mindset. This has become a debatable issue whether,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
can do better than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
regarding children's development or not. I tend to believe with former view and in this essay I will
The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "go"
going
to elaborate this.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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Teacher
is not
merely
a person who takes a textbook and reads from that to students.
Rather
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teacher
is someone who teaches all the things what need in advance step. Morality,
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intricates
of life, value of time, subject of matter, Physics, Biology and etcetera, Which can not be
Consider using a past participle here: "learned", "learnt".
learn
by any academic book.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Only
a true guide can guide you through all of these.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, It is easy to compare
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parents
and
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teachers
since we have understood the authorities of
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
ideal mentor. The things that we learn from our
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parents
are incomparable. I
The verb 'denying' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
am denying
that the knowledge gain from
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teacher
is invaluable
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
how to survive, talk, distinguish
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
from well, and a number of life lessons could acquire from our keeper.

Parents sacrifice
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many
things
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just
to ensure a better life of their children. To illustrate, take a case of student who can not able to pay the fees of study due to scarcity of funds. In this situation beloved tutor would rarely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
forward whilst
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
would manage resources from anywhere.

To sum up, The lessons of academic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teachers
are great valuable which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to build a bright future whereas,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parents
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upbring
their children with great nurture as
socially
and
emotionally
.
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IELTS essay Parents are the best teachers. Discuss and give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
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