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Describe cause of world poverty and hunger and suggest at least one solution

Describe cause of world poverty and hunger and suggest at least one solution Wmg1e
Modern society is generating an increasing amount of poverty as well as hunger and serious poverty has become one of the pressing issues both in developing and developed countries. In this essay, some causes of this problem and what individuals and governments can do to tackle this will be discussed To begin with, the global population has reached a staggering seven billion recently. Also, this led people to access a variety type of jobs that have limited space in the world. So it is possible to increase the unemployment rate compared to the past. For example, there are some people whose income level from employment is so low that basic human needs can not be met. For this reason, a broadband of the poor is still striving to get a fair share of prosperity with no actual hope, the fabric of this society is getting weaker and under the poverty In addition, another cause of increasing poverty is that the education gap between the poor and the rich is getting wider over time. For example, the poor can not afford to buy educational materials and attend school because of a lack of income. For this reason, the poor would not be taught by qualified teachers. Therefore, an increase in the unemployment rate as well as the wider educational gap of the poor and the rich lead to an increase in poverty and hunger rate. There are numerous steps that individuals and governments can undertake to alleviate to this condition certain laws, regulations on the availability of education should be established. For example, the government should provide more job availability to the public so that many people can secure an income. Moreover, a qualified teacher should provide a wide range of educational opportunities to the public, especially in developing countries. For instance, the qualified teacher will train how to educate, how to use materials to teachers who do not have much teaching skills. For this reason, a training and providing more jobs by individuals and governments can play an important role in reducing this problem. In conclusion, an increase of unemployment and getting wider education gap between the poor and the rich increased the poverty rapidly. To tackle this problem the teacher should train a high quality of teaching skills to teacher who live in developing countries and the government must provide more jobs to the public
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poverty
as well
as hunger and serious
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poverty
has become one of the pressing issues both in developing and
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developed countries
. In this essay,
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some
causes of this problem and what individuals and
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governments
can do to tackle this will
be discussed


To
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begin
with, the global population has reached a staggering seven billion recently.
Also
, this led
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people
to access a variety type of
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jobs
that have limited space in the world.
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So
it is possible to
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increase
the unemployment rate compared to the past.
For example
, there are
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some
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people
whose income level from employment is
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so
low that basic human needs can not
be met
.
For this reason
, a broadband of the
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poor
is
still
striving to
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get
a
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fair
share of prosperity with no actual hope, the fabric of this society is getting weaker and under the poverty

In addition
, another cause of increasing
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poverty
is that the education gap between the
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poor
and the rich is getting wider over time.
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For
example, the
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poor
can not afford to
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buy
educational materials and attend school
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because
of a lack of income.
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For
this reason, the
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poor
would not
be taught
by qualified
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teachers
.
Therefore
, an
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increase
in the unemployment rate
as well
as the wider educational gap of the
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poor
and the rich lead to an
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increase
in
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poverty
and hunger rate.

There are numerous steps that individuals and
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governments
can undertake to alleviate to this condition certain laws, regulations on the availability of education should
be established
.
For example
, the
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government
should provide more
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job
availability to the public
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so
that
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many
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people
can secure an income.
Moreover
, a qualified
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teacher
should provide a wide range of educational opportunities to the public,
especially
in
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developing countries
.
For instance
, the qualified
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teacher
will train how to educate, how to
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use
materials to
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teachers
who do not have much teaching
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skills
.
For this reason
, a training and providing more
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jobs
by individuals and
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governments
can play an
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important
role in reducing this problem.

In conclusion
, an
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increase
of unemployment and getting wider education gap between the
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poor
and the rich increased the
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poverty
rapidly
. To tackle this problem the
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teacher
should train a high quality of teaching
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skills
to
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teacher
who
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live
in
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developing countries
and the
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government
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must
provide more
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jobs
to the
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public
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IELTS essay Describe cause of world poverty and hunger and suggest at least one solution

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
395 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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