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The quality of education is very important in our life. When many people argue that parents teach their children better than teachers do, others think that professional teachers are more qualified. I completely agree that parents are the best teachers in the world because they put the foundation and moral value of children’s life. Firstly, I strongly believe that the basis of human life is founded by our parents, in other words, school start at 6 years old, at this age children have already essential knowledge about society bases such as community pillars. For example at birth human brain is Wight sheet, parents put all their energy to teach their babies how to speak, how to walk, how to eat. Many studies proved that family bonding gives children more confidence to acquire new things. Thus children learn more with parents than at institutes. Secondly, there are some values that educators can’t teach for children, in another meaning academy can not provide a complete education in the proper sense of the word especially for moral and life value. For instance, with academic programmes we can learn math or physics, geography or science which permit us the Learning to know or to do, except our family any academic book can provide the learning to be and to live together or how to socialize so that professional professors can’t teach how to get a happy living. To conclude, as the Leader Mahatma Gandhi said “family are the university and parents are the teachers”, I absolutely agree that parents are the first and the best teachers as they give us the initial and the high-quality lesson that we can’t find anywhere at school or in books.
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, at this age
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have already essential knowledge about society bases such as community pillars.
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at birth human brain is Wight sheet,
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parents
put all their energy to
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their babies how to speak, how to walk, how to eat.
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studies proved that family bonding gives
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more confidence to acquire new things.
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learn more with
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than at institutes.

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values that educators can’t
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, in another meaning academy can not provide a complete education in the proper sense of the word
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we can learn math or physics, geography or science which permit us the Learning to know or to do, except our family any academic book can provide the learning to be and to
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together or how to socialize
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that professional professors can’t
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how to
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a happy living.

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, as the Leader Mahatma Gandhi said “family are the university and
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are the
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as they give us the initial and the high-quality lesson that we can’t find anywhere at school or in books.
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IELTS essay parents are the best teachers

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
282 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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