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Parents are best teacher

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It is widely admitted that study is a crucial part of personal development and play a huge role in people's future. Majority of people agree that parents are the best teacher for their childs. Personally, I completely disagree with this and I will explain why. On the one hand, parents introduce their children to life experience before they start school, which helps their children grow up to be good individual in the future. Moreover, perents know what their children need and what their children are most interest in as well as parents understand how to instill the new activities, so they can be perfect in the future and have no trouble going to school because parents know their children since birth and are paying more attention to their children anyway. As an example, the child's school life will be easier if they explain the basic of experient to their children. Therefore, parents could be beneficial for their adolescent as a teacher. Nonetheless, I disagree with that parents are best teacher, because there are some disadvantages which are worth to mention. Firstly, parents have their own work and problems and they can not absolutely focussed on the teaching process. As a result, childs have not accurate and quality learning schedule, which negatively effect the learning of the subject in the course of educating. Secondly, not all parents are talented as a teachers. For example relatives not able to explain various method, if the children does not understand due to lack of teaching techniques. So not all parents are qualified teachers. I
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people
's future. Majority of
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parents
are the best teacher for their
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.
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, I completely disagree with this and I will
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explain
why.

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parents
introduce their
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children
to life experience
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before
they
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start
school, which
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helps
their
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children
grow up to be
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good
individual in the future.
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,
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perents
know what their
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children
need and what their
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children
are most interest in
as well
as
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parents
understand how to instill the new activities,
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so
they can be perfect in the future and have no trouble going to school
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because
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parents
know their
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children
since birth and are paying more attention to their
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children
anyway. As an example, the child's school life will be easier if they
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explain
the basic of
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experient
to their
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could be beneficial for their adolescent as a teacher.

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parents
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are best
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disadvantages which are worth to mention.
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,
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parents
have their
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work and
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problems and
they can not
absolutely
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focussed
on the teaching process.
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,
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childs have
not accurate and quality learning schedule, which
negatively
effect the learning of the subject in the course of educating.
Secondly
, not all
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parents
are talented
as
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.
For example
relatives not able to
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explain
various method, if the
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children
does not understand due to lack of teaching techniques.
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So
not all
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parents
are qualified
teachers.

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IELTS essay Parents are best teacher

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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