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Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give relevant examples from your knowledge and write at least 250 words.

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Outgrowing population is one of the serious concern for the environment. Major cause of this threat is growing poverty, illiteracy among people and many more, which can be sorted out if the government and people co-operate with each other. Major concerns  for overpopulation is poverty, due to which people think that if they will have more children, then they will have more helping hands to earn money in the future. Another  main cause is that people are illiterate and they do not take any specific protection during conception and thus, keep on giving birth to many children. But they do not think from the environment prospective.   For instance, if population will be more, more housing is required and if more space is needed then  we need to cut down the trees, which will be an ultimate harm ti the nature. According to the Census of 2005 in India, which says that Delhi has highest population density. Moreover, recently Delhi has been declared as the most polluted city in the entire world. So from this evidence, we can prove that growing population is directly  proportional to pollution.   This could be due to the fact that- the more the people-the  excessive   motor vehicles are  used-  the more automobiles are used, the maximum carbon dioxide is evolved in the atmosphere. To conclude, the government should work on the root of the problem rather than its branches.   In my opinion, seminars should be held from City to city by the government, which will provide information to the people about the benefits of small families.   Moreover, people should get counselling sessions from the offices  of  societies such as Red Cross, which may lead to the depletion of over growing population.
Outgrowing
population
is one of the serious concern for the environment. Major cause of this threat is growing poverty, illiteracy among
people
and
many
more, which can
be sorted
out if the
government
and
people
co-operate with each other.

Major concerns
 
for overpopulation is poverty, due to which
people
think
that if they will have more children, then they will have more helping hands to earn money in the future. Another
 
main cause is that
people
are
illiterate and
they do not take any specific protection during conception and
thus
,
keep
on giving birth to
many
children.
But
they do not
think
from the environment prospective.
 
For instance
, if
population
will be more, more housing
is required
and if more space
is needed
then
 
we need to
cut
down the trees, which will be an ultimate harm ti the nature.

According to the Census of 2005 in India, which says that Delhi has
highest
population
density.
Moreover
, recently Delhi has
been declared
as the most polluted city in the entire world.
So
from this evidence, we can prove that growing
population
is
directly
 
proportional to pollution.
 
This could be due to the fact that- the more the
people
-the
 
excessive
  
motor vehicles are
 
used
-
 
the more automobiles are
used
, the maximum carbon dioxide
is evolved
in the atmosphere.

To conclude
, the
government
should work on the root of the problem
rather
than its branches.
 
In my opinion, seminars should
be held
from City to city by the
government
, which will provide information to the
people
about the benefits of
small
families.
 
Moreover
,
people
should
get
counselling sessions from the offices
 
of
 
societies such as Red Cross, which may lead to the depletion of over growing
population
.
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IELTS essay Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. Give relevant examples from your knowledge and

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