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Over the past few years, there has been a remarkable increse in the number of parents both making a livelihood results in the lack of time taking care of their offsprings. This essay will investigate the factors resposible for this situation and its negative consequences. There are a variety of reasons for the distant relationship between the children and their parents due to parents’ busy situation.

Over the past few years, there has been a remarkable increse in the number of parents both making a livelihood results in the lack of time taking care of their offsprings. This essay will investigate the factors resposible for this situation and its negative consequences. There are a variety of reasons for the distant relationship between the children and their parents due to parents’ busy situation. WqMkK
Over the past few years, there has been a remarkable increse in the number of parents both making a livelihood results in the lack of time taking care of their offsprings. This essay will investigate the factors resposible for this situation and its negative consequences. There are a variety of reasons for the distant relationship between the children and their parents due to parents’ busy situation.
Over the past few years, there has been a remarkable
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in the number of parents both making a livelihood results in the lack of time taking care of their
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offsprings
. This essay will investigate the factors
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resposible
for this situation and its
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consequences.

There are a variety of reasons for the distant relationship between

the children and their parents due to parents’ busy situation.
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IELTS essay Over the past few years, there has been a remarkable increse in the number of parents both making a livelihood results in the lack of time taking care of their offsprings. This essay will investigate the factors resposible for this situation and its negative consequences. There are a variety of reasons for the distant relationship between the children and their parents due to parents’ busy situation.

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