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over population has become the most serious issue in the developing countries.

over population has become the most serious issue in the developing countries. 12WA
over population has become the most serious issue in the developing countries. over crowding is leading people towards health issues especially communicable disease. the other natural resources which create shortge of water, food and fuel. Exceeding population in many parts of the part creates problem such as unemployment became the number of jobs are limited in camparsion to the number of people, which may lead them into crimimnal activties. deforestration is done to make space for people residents and accomadate them great quallity of food is required to feed the exceeding population which is incoperationg in natural source depelition. certainmeasures can be taken to over come the issue, Govenment should stick to are child policy like in china. In school solleges and offices individual should be taught the consequences of over population. Compign on birth control should be done to creat awarness specially in slum's of under developing country. In conclussion, Over population is a big hurdle which has to over come and strict policies to control these issues.
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over
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population
has become the most serious
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issue
in the
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developing countries
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over
crowding is leading
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people
towards health
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issues
especially
communicable disease.

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the
other natural resources which create
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shortge
of water, food and fuel.

Exceeding
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population
in
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many
parts of the part creates problem such as unemployment became the number of jobs
are limited


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in
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camparsion
to the number of
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people
, which may lead them into
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crimimnal
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activties
.

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deforestration
is done
to
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make
space for
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people
residents and
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accomadate
them great
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quallity
of food

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is
required to feed the exceeding
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population
which is
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incoperationg
in natural source
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depelition
.

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certainmeasures
can
be taken
to
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over
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come
the
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issue
,
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Govenment
should stick to are child policy like in
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china
.

In school
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solleges
and offices individual should
be taught
the consequences of
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over
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population
.
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Compign
on birth control should
be done


to
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creat
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awarness
specially
in slum's of under
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developing country
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In
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conclussion
,
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population
is a
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big
hurdle which
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has to
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over
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come
and strict policies to control these
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issues
.

IELTS essay over population has become the most serious issue in the developing countries.

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
169 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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