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Our live will effect the next generations

Our live will effect the next generations NlPmg
It is critically important to know that life style has changes now then it was in the past. If you had coma in 1990 and after thirty years later you wakeup theses days. You will see a lot of various things that you can not believe it. The is many positive and negtive happened. But i think the world in future will turning to the negative side. So, yes i agree with the statement mentions above. I feel this way for two main reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. first of all, current health state might be weak then it was lately, Due to diseases that causes many damages for people. to be more specific, during the pandemic of covid-19. We saw a thousand of people dieing because of some factory in china. And i was one of the victims of this virus. But i survive due to god bless. from that, I felt anyone could invent something will result in danger to human. Based on this, I think the future could be issue. Secondly, Technology should be one of this reason why? Because it is transfered the whole in this universe by made everyone far from each other, We do not have contact with our relatives and we not able to see them. And we only meets only in holidays. . Because we just keep asking about the there news by chatting only on mobiles and applications. We not able to communicate and had real talk face to face. also we start comparing our life with other. To sum up everything has been stated so far and according to the reasons i provides above. I strongly i agree with the sentence. Due to it make our world at risk and no one can what coming next.
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then it was in the past. If you had coma in 1990 and after thirty years later you
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wakeup


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theses
days. You will
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see
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future


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with the statement mentions above. I feel this way for two main reasons, which
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will explore in the following essay.

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first of all
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health state might be weak then it was lately, Due to diseases that causes
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damages for
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be more specific, during the pandemic of
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covid-19
. We
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factory in
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china
. And
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was one of the victims of this virus.

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survive due to god bless.

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that, I felt anyone could invent something will result in
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danger
to human.

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the future could be issue.

Secondly
, Technology should be one of this reason why?
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it is
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transfered
the whole in this
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universe


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made everyone far from each other, We do not have contact with our
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relatives and
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not able to
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them.

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in holidays.
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we
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asking about the there news by chatting
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only
on mobiles and applications.

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not able to communicate and had real talk face to face.

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also
we
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comparing our life with other.

To sum up everything has
been stated
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far and according to the reasons
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provides above.

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strongly
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i
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agree
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our world at
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risk
and no one
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can what
coming
next
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IELTS essay Our live will effect the next generations

Essay
  American English
15 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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