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Increasing the price of oil will help in declining traffic jams over the world and reduce the pollution

Increasing the price of oil will help in declining traffic jams over the world and reduce the pollution PR7Mg
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In the ultra modern epoch, it
is found
to debate

the
alma1124 in declining
thabbir
Jams over the
grabe
reduce
the
atteacted
a
Palton
,
Susipolisingly
, this notion
fau
101
af
opposition the
roughout
the world. The
repcoming
paragraphs world crest my
asiguiment
's
Hogarding
Statement light on.

3 I completely
discoud
with the
Plenty
of
Plecisone
above
robreption
Comt
.
First
and
toxemos
.
Tolcettic
Jims
me the most severe
verban
Raising the cast
appstopen
are way
pipoblems
first
coude
of deal with this the
wocherization
fambiem
that it
catherts
.
the
lower and middle
People
's Rich persons are not
attiected
by the
because
tassil
they can the Have
People
who
also
abtect
CICERS
People
.
.
higher
MOR
affared
14.
Forstealing
becomes pour and economy
buiden
middle
class
. It the counter
the


Apart from it. How car
highet
of one forget price, landing
Plems
the fruits and vegetables.
which
will contribute the globe.
about
cost that
sa
mise
in higher
intlation
revell
ack


On the
conteary
. A
geloup
of voice that expanding the
amound
People
inclined
toand
middle


base the prices for

will

Personal vehicles
so
that they
use
mare public

thammspart
and it
also
help
the

economy of the

country, and money is more
used
in other
medringh


causes if
we welfare
,
Inteastructure
, education,

Checelthcare
and
so
on

•Herromering
the last
nall
, I am ok that increasing cast of middle and lower
claLSS
.
mat
the ideal
sarvion
فكلم
.
.
the
fuel
People
the opinion.
abfects
the and
also
it is
reduce
teattic
problemy
expand the grep between
bich
und
Poast
countries as there is not any
Planible
argarment
against the
very
phenomenon
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IELTS essay Increasing the price of oil will help in declining traffic jams over the world and reduce the pollution

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  American English
14 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
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