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Our childhood memories we discussed today

Our childhood memories we discussed today Bw1Rj

I was born in Iwakuni city, Yamaguchi. I had lived there until I came here. When I was an elementary school student, I used to play outside with my friends afterschool. I would usually go to a park near the school by bike as soon as I arrived at my home. I remember we took joy in talking a lot and laughed with ease. Fortunately, I still have gotten along with some of my friends at that time. Next, let me introduce my classmates’ memories in their childhood. Momoe said she failed to attend an entrance ceremony when she was in elementary school. This is because she was nervous about new school life. In fact, she told their parents a lie that she had a stomachache then. Koto was obsessed with coloring books. She said that those reminds her of her childhood. Yuya mentioned he would like swimming. I was surprised to hear that he can barely swim 50 meters even now.

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