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Organized tours to remote community are increasingly popular. It is a positive and negative development for local people and local environment.

Organized tours to remote community are increasingly popular. It is a positive and negative development for local people and local environment. nW0R

The trend of organizing tours to rural area are becoming significantly famous. It has both pros and cons for native people. There are numerous positive benefits for the people of remote areas. The primary factor is that it enhances economic growth of the area. Tourism attracts people from all over the globe that means more employment thus flourish economic development. For example, tourist spend their money the accommodation, food services, clothing and so on. Moreover, people of local areas interact with tourists therefore it helps in development of social skills and there are chances to understand people of various regions and their perspective of life

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 of various regions and their perspective of life