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Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development. 1Y07
In present days, the most of individuals preferred electronic shopping due to the advancement of technology. This is also the convient mode of shopping. In my prospective, online shopping have numerous both pros and cons. However, in this easy I will discuss only plausible merits of home purchasing products in the following sections. To commence with, there are manifold benefits of shopping through various websites. First and foremost point that is saving the plathora of time and penny. when we buy any online it is helpful for save the cost of traveling. For instance, there are certain kinds of shopping websites which is useful for home delivery such as Amazon, flipcard and Myntra. These sites provides the greatest discount on festivals like Diwali and New year. Moreover, teleshopping has the more convenient and eassy method to buying meterials.
In present days, the
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most of individuals
preferred electronic
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shopping
due to the advancement of technology. This is
also
the
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convient
mode of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
. In my prospective, online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
have numerous both pros and cons.
However
, in this easy I will discuss
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
plausible merits of home purchasing products in the following sections. To commence with, there are manifold benefits of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
through various websites.
First
and foremost point
that is
saving the
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plathora
of time and penny.
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when
we
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buy
any online it is helpful for save the cost of traveling.
For instance
, there are certain kinds of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shopping
websites which is useful for home delivery such as Amazon,
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flipcard
and
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Myntra
. These sites
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provides
the greatest discount on festivals like Diwali and New year.
Moreover
,
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teleshopping
has the more convenient and
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eassy
method to buying
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meterials
.
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IELTS essay Online shopping is replacing offline or shopping from stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development.

Essay
  American English
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138 words
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